Fire Light

Hmm... very good, very good! Only one thing so far: in this paragraph, (“Dangit,” she muttered, it was a queen of spades. “I didn’t need one of those.”) just a ...

If the internet would work for me for just five minutes, these reviews would come a lot faster, butt… Anyway, here’s the review. Hmm… very good, very good. One thing ...

He's an Pat Buchanan re-incarnated as an alien, of course!!! (Hey, it's just as random as you guys)

Of course, Bob!!!!!! Uhh... what exactally is it? *hides*

Hmm... verynice. Well, i can't find anything grammatically incorrect about it, either. i can't explain how, but the entire poem just seems ironic. ;) Anyway, good job.

Hmm... very interesting. Well, aside from what the other three people said, the only thing i could find wrong with it is that you need a comma before direct addresses ...

Hmm... it's pretty good. Well, everyone beat me to all the technical stuff, although you might want to put a few commas in "I see those eyes I see that ...

Hmm... it was interesting. If i might disagree with just about everyone, the way you at first said "you" to get the mood for the poem, then switched to "I" ...

Hmm... LOL! Finally, someone wrote a hiku! Very good, very good! *Mumbles and laughs* Purple Elephants! :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :mrgreen: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant

Hmm... wow. Is this really your life? If not, you put so much passion into this that one would think it was... i know they said to not just say ...

Well, everyone beat me to the technical stuff, but here goes. Hmm... very interesting. Your structure is good, although you might want to clean the format (paragraphs and such.) Also, ...

Random name generator, because (a), it's the only one i've seen, and (b), because it's fun to randomly pm random random members at random moments when you are feeling random. ...

Hmm... very good. Jabber Hut just pointed out just about everything technical about this post, except " "Good afternoon, she started, " needs a " after "afternoon". Also, i'm not ...

Whew, back on at last. Anyway, good job. Although, in the sentence "my greatest dream-to be a writer.", you might want to put a space after the dream.;) Just technical ...

Hmm... very good. i can't say that i can find anything wrong with it. but that's probably because i've never had anything more than a best friend (eg. no gfs. ...